Wednesday, December 9, 2009

10 suspense pact minutes…

I was waiting…

He was sitting in the chair, perfectly hassle-free….
Just then, a dark, red-eyed and robust looking man arrived and splashed water on his face.
He then captured a blade and put under his chin…
Small droplets of blood came out…
For next few moments nothing happened…

Again a splash of water on the face and the barber moved away…
Man stood up as he was done with the shaving...

3 comments:

********** said...

Hey this one was nice,bas thoda jyada chota tha....

Manisha Shanbhag said...

I liked the way u put it...
Yes u could have increased the suspense even more :D

Chetan Giridhar said...

thanks guys for reading and commenting....Will improve on those.